Nice trailer, the turn from Woe to crow forest was also a nice touch.
But a couple of things on it: Pacing! You can cut the trailer by a minute and you'll get the same feel while making it considerably easier to parse on the viewer.
I showed it to a few people, and most agreed on that one minute would be the better time.
And the fire, it is too clean. As the centerpiece, (to me) it feels too much like an audio waveform. Giving it some shape to make it more mesmerizing will help the time pass faster for the viewer.
Also, I thought that the spider that gets shown at 1:03 was due to the fire crackling, but turned out that it just shone because it felt like it.
Thanks! Fair claim, since the pacing issue could be applied to the majority of my animatiom work, honestly.The shorter version exists as well, but I uploaded this one first, since I wanted to demonstrate the full version of the main theme.
Im hoping to remake it, once I fix the most troubling piece - the game itself.
HatiValcoran
Nice trailer, the turn from Woe to crow forest was also a nice touch.
But a couple of things on it: Pacing! You can cut the trailer by a minute and you'll get the same feel while making it considerably easier to parse on the viewer.
I showed it to a few people, and most agreed on that one minute would be the better time.
And the fire, it is too clean. As the centerpiece, (to me) it feels too much like an audio waveform. Giving it some shape to make it more mesmerizing will help the time pass faster for the viewer.
Also, I thought that the spider that gets shown at 1:03 was due to the fire crackling, but turned out that it just shone because it felt like it.
Still, you get two rats, a nice little effort.
Good luck.
PorriDge4
Thanks! Fair claim, since the pacing issue could be applied to the majority of my animatiom work, honestly.The shorter version exists as well, but I uploaded this one first, since I wanted to demonstrate the full version of the main theme.
Im hoping to remake it, once I fix the most troubling piece - the game itself.